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Got It Going For Them by ~The-Pumes:iconThe-Pumes:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Urban > Song


They had everything going for them
Great Families and Great Homes
Everything was so great

[Chorus]

Then it happened
Everything came down
It all happened so fast

[End Chorus]

Oh, poor Mandy
Had two kids
Only to commit suicide
In the end

Mike was going far
Till it came down
Failed College,
Killed himself
In the end

[Chorus]

Then it happened
Everything came down
It all happened so fast

[End Chorus]

Susan went hooker
It was actually good
Then she got shot up
By her pimp

Chris had it
Almost fine
But, a drive-by
Is what did him in

[Chorus]

Then it happened
Everything came down
It all happened so fast

[End Chorus]


A neighborhood once so fine
Is now crime level- nine

They had it great
Great Families and Great Homes
Everything so fine

Then it happened
Everything came down
It all happened so fast…

[singer slowly fades away]
©2006-2009 ~The-Pumes
:iconthe-pumes:

Author's Comments

This is a song inspired by anotehr song. Oh, yeah it is so original /sarcasm

I hope you like it deals with the lif eof people and how sometimes everythign good goes compeltely bad for anyone. The song is supposed to have an upbeat tune to it making it sound somewhat odd for the lkyrics ,but I also tried not to make the lyrics sound liek rap or hip-hop. I also tried not to make is sound ghetto. But, it it does to everyone..oh well then....

This is one of my 'darke'r songs than most...,but thsi song sucks ,but it will get me pageviews!

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~2k-rammerizkool Oct 2, 2006, 4:21:46 PM
hey, i took a look at it, but i'm not gonna look at your page, so i guess it won't get you as many pageviews as you hoped (:

but really, why do pageviews matter?

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~The-Pumes Oct 2, 2006, 4:26:08 PM
They don't matter to me as long people like my writing is all that matters.


But, thanks for reading/looking.

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'lolololollolol i ar3 a n00b lololol h4x0rz duz any1 kno h0w not to b a n00b lololololololol' - Half of the the peopel of the internet >>
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~sandlessxtime Oct 5, 2006, 3:32:06 PM
Its nice...ya know...but...its a bit dramatic...it'd do a bit better...as actually music...the guitar sounds written look odd.

Just sayinggg. XD

`♥Spike

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Prenez un coeur. Laissez un esprit sérieux. Si l'esprit peut créer, alors il peut juste TRUQUER un coeur.
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~The-Pumes Oct 5, 2006, 3:47:24 PM
JUst mys tyle of asong sayign what type. And it';'s meant to be somewhat unsettlign at being somewhat upbeat...

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'lolololollolol i ar3 a n00b lololol h4x0rz duz any1 kno h0w not to b a n00b lololololololol' - Half of the the peopel of the internet >>
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~sandlessxtime Oct 20, 2006, 4:47:41 PM
O.o -ish confused-

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